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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2000-07-15 05:40 PM



I want to get to know you
I want to learn about you
I want to feel you watching me as I cross the floor
I want to hear you laugh
I want to see you cry
I want to see right through your shy blue eyes

I want to get to know you
Not like any other
I want to learn about you
I want to know what makes you smile
I want to find the time to talk a while

I want to get to know you
I want to learn about you
I want to hear you sigh
I want to see the sunrise
in your eyes

I want to get to know you
I want to learn about you
I want to know your dreams
I want to hear you fears
I want to be part of your fantasy

I want to get to know you
I want learn about you
so quiet and shy
I believe you and I could fly

I want to get to know you
I want to learn about you
I want to see inside your heart
I want to look into your soul
maybe it's you that could make me whole

I want to learn about you
I want to get to know you
got to get you away from here
then maybe we could start to share

I want to get to know you
I want to learn about you
never hurt you
never desert you
I want to learn about you
I want to know whats on your mind
I believe you may be one of a kind
I want to learn about you
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Julie  






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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
1 posted 2000-07-15 05:44 PM


My computer submitted this twice I am not sure why I will have to find out....sorry  

Julie :)



Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
2 posted 2000-07-20 12:24 PM


JulieAnn...everyones desire all wrapped up in your words...glitch or not its well worth the read

never say never

SEA
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with you
3 posted 2000-07-20 12:33 PM


JulieAnn~ this is beautiful and so very sweet! Who ever it's for, they should see this. -SEA (by the way glitch's happen,I've done a few! No one will mind   )

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Corazon
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209

4 posted 2000-07-20 06:17 PM


this is so softly beautiful...very very nice, like it a lot.....mmmmmmmmm leaves me remembering when I had such a dreamy "i want you" feeling......
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
5 posted 2000-07-20 06:27 PM


JulieAnn* Such pure and tender "wants"...not
to much to ask of love. Beautiful piece~

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-07-20 06:46 PM


Such simple request for that of a true love.  This is beautifully written and I enjoyed it much.
JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
7 posted 2000-07-20 07:35 PM


Thank you for oyur replys,,,soory no replys from me lately...I have been extremely busy....will get around to it soon....
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
8 posted 2000-07-20 07:40 PM


I agree, it's great to have that 'wanting to know you more' feeling..

Nice writing sweetheart..

HUGS

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