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The Trickle of Obsessiveness
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The Trickle of Obsessiveness |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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The Trickle of Obsessiveness The trickle of obsessiveness gravels and twists my brain, scoring images of nothingness. Light the illusional candelabra, dine upon dressed up silhouettes born of a doubt playing orchestra. Catch the wind frolicking in place, a messed up piece of hair styled now tangled beyond simple disgrace. Drown the curser in his own core as flickering shadows tease seductively, run toward survival and lock the door. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
WOW...blown away this is a wonderful piece. LD. perfect "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
"run toward survival and lock the door" yes yes yes never say never |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow! Obsessed is what I am with these words  Great poem Lost Dreamer!Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh yes..Lost Dreamer... The Trickle Of Obsessiveness...you have described it so well and I know it is trickling into everyone, here's hoping that it can be overcome to a degree of balance....this is very well done! |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Gloria, You've got my attention, WOW INDEED! You really shine here! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow is right! Well done, Gloria!  Denise |
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