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Martini
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Toronto, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2000-07-15 10:57 AM


Peacefullness
the quiet, only the sounds of the bugs and the wind
we sit on the hillside
aware of each others presence
but alone in our thoughts
feeling only
Peacefullness

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Elizabeth
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1 posted 2000-07-15 11:02 AM


How gentle and quiet this is-you have captured the evening in your poem.

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!



IsGona
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2 posted 2000-07-15 11:05 AM


Such a pretty thaughts.

aware of each others presence
but alone in our thoughts

..well said
look forward to more work from you
~IsGona~

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