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The language of line (part one)
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The language of line (part one) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The language of line (part one) Birth and interaction makes a language. And it starts with line of which there are two. Curved is feminine and straight masculine Now just think a moment and which are you? The next step is the meaning of three lines Vertical, horizontal, diagonal. Each one of these has a separate meaning And with these we complete the arsenal. The diagonal is an action line. And the vertical is an action cast. The horizontal is a restive line And the combination makes up the past. From these you can analyze some meaning The up line elation, down dejection. But they must be done with color in view So watch for my color explanation. From the two we can reach conclusion Which may well add to your confusion. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You've piqued my interest ... draw on !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymore..... I love words that get me thinking, and this one did......I'm ready for Part 2!!!!!!! Great work!! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your artistry lies before us...now fill in the blanks...as I am now confused... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
could you be any cooler?  very cool Sy-guy... bring on the color...bring on the confusion i stay in that state any way  later-cool-poetry-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Lessons through "poetic lines" .... oh, I like this! Teach on ... Part 2 awaits! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Sunny1, Sunshine, Janet and Kit. Only you are ready for part two. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Teacher ~ You will notice that you have an ALL FEMALE class so far ... Now that's FIRST CLASS by itself ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, How nice, what could be better? *L* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Are you a physicist? just curious... hehe enjoyed this much, Sy... you are a very fine writer! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow....lots to think about. My slow brain nods in awe. wonderful. Heh could someone give the beginners notes? lol "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doreen, No but an amateur painter analyst. *L* |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Sy, nope... you're no amatuer... you're a pro *smile* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Doreen, And you are a love. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
The two should stay together. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, allow me to give you a big hand......assuming that's what you're reading? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Balladeer. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Too good for a premature burial. Get back up there!! |
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