Crush You (like a bug) Part Two

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Open Poetry #8

Crush You (like a bug) Part Two

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-15 07:45 AM

~I wrote this poem after a fight with my ex boyfriend and with the pain that i has suffered I thought the only thing to do was to write it down instead of doing what I really thought....Thank God I didnt do what i wanted to do...lol~

Oh, I crushed you,
Like a bug,
You feel it,
Dont you?.

It really hurts
inside,
To be ashamed,
And also denied.

Now you know what I
felt that night,
You walking out without
ending the fight.

See, its ok for you to
start,
And me to end,
But I want to part,
Never think about
a mend.

You had your chance,
And now im making
a stance.

Oh, Im going to ruin
you,
Knowing me,
You know its true.

So, dont mess with me
again,
I'll kill you,
Oh, Im looking forward til
then.

Ann
Member

since 2000-07-07

Posts 64
Australia

1 posted 2000-07-15 08:10 AM

Wow....what a poem. Good for you for taking a stand and i hope things work out for you in the end (without bloodshed)

~Ann~

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2000-07-15 08:49 AM

Beth......

     Hey....I know that feeling!!!!!!

     I bet it felt good to write this one,
     huh? (At least it's legal!!)

     Nice job, well written, good thoughts!

Your words become music to my soul......

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