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A Father's Daughter
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A Father's Daughter |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Born to this world, that winters day A special gift, brought suns warming ray The miracle of life, a joyful gift to all A fathers proud moment, brings a smile to recall Remember that cry, that first breath of air Into this world you came, child without a care Wrapped with care and thrust into fathers arms That first moment, even then, undeniable charms Years now past since that faithful day Never been so happy that you came my way The suns warm rays, you they still follow You've grown and blossomed, seeking your tomorrow Our views they differ, rarely we see eye to eye Still I'll always be there, should you need to cry But through heartaches and pain we share this love A Father's Daughter, a truly special gift from above God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
What a wonderful piece this is!!!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
EagleOne...... If you wrote this for your daughter, she's very lucky to have a Dad like you! This is really nice....... Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is simply beautiful EagleOne! Your love and warmth just shines through your words ... a wonderful treasure and keepsake for your fortunate daughter! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ No one tugs dad's heartstrings quite the way a daughter does. I think they are sent to show dads the softer sides of love. Works, huh ? Beautiful and tender are your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is perfect Eagle what a tender adoring poem a wonderful tribute to a fathers love and understanding... this makes it official now... we ARE gonna call ya that "P" word  later-daddy-o-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Justbleu.....It's kind of special for me, anything I write for my daughter always is. Thankyou. Sunny1.....It was indeed written for her, and perhaps it is I who is the lucky one. Thankyou.Kit...Thankyou for your wonderful words, at least she will know how I feel. Marge.....So true, they certainly have a special hold on us, and I think we love it that way. JM...What can I say but thankyou for your kind words my fellow poet. < !signature-->God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
how unbearably lovely...I dont have a daughter and its been one of the great disappointments in my life |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh man, do I ever appreciate this poem. I know just exactly how you feel. I only have one child, a daughter, everything you are saying throughout the lines I can relate to. The not seeing eye to eye etc. But I have to agree with you, the special magic of holding her for the first time.... can't be explained in this universe..... sincerely..........ethome |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula......I love all my children, though each is special in thier own unique way. ethome......Yes it is a difficult feeling to explain, I think you may have said it best, it's magical! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
See why dad's are soooooooo special...they love us no matter what the teen years bring Wonderful writing from your heart for your beautiful daughter I'm VERY sure she appreciated this statement of love~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterfly....I think it is the daughters who are special, you just can't help but love ém no matter what. Thankyou my friend!God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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UFgirl05 Junior Member
since 2000-07-17
Posts 10Winter Haven, FL, USA |
If that was for your daughter I'm sure she loves you just as much! That was a nice way to express your love through this poem |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beautiful this love for a daughter and the way you have described it in this lovely poem! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
UFgirl05....yes, it was for my daughter and yes I know she does. Thanks for reading and your comment.Martie...I don't know what to say except thankyou! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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