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Ode to the Artist of the Sunset Mural
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Ode to the Artist of the Sunset Mural |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Ode to the Artist of the Sunset Mural The sky is colored with charcoal tints and shades of your soul that swirl and fly in a celestial sea that feathers your grace The vibrant shade of a peacock feather merges with the underbelly of a wren the lavender abandon of the rose has been swept into the opening begonia Your blue has so many seasons and to set into the horizon of your day is to glimpse a color wheel that has swirled and fused majestic and where the fire sits into the sea the desert sand has called and been blessed with heated sulfur until the sky melts The dark bound earth has feasted laying awed and captured has called in the cicada’s charm to hold the heat in perfect harmony rock me in the sand of your landscape under the cactus lay me down fill my need with rainbows of your whim and nurture my dreamy dare with majesty you are my artist |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
This is quite thought invoking Martie Has my creative juices flowing  [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Martie...sigh... SPEECHLESS!!! let's getting writing as soon as possible...!!!  K[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and where the fire sits into the sea the desert sand has called and been blessed with heated sulfur until the sky melts The dark bound earth has feasted laying awed and captured has called in the cicada’s charm to hold the heat in perfect harmony rock me in the sand of your landscape under the cactus lay me down fill my need with rainbows of your whim and nurture my dreamy dare with majesty you are my artist --------------- your just so darn good at this imagery stuff.. your poets pen is quite the arteest too  tonite i was sitting in my van waiting for my daughter and there was the most amazing full moon and clouds.. and I said to my self... martie would look at that and draw it with her words... I just cant get the imagery out... need a broken hearted moon..maybe then LOL beautiful poem martie-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I didn't know that you bought one of my paintings.LOL (you can though). This was beautiful and I could invision the whole landscape as it unfolded with your words. Excelent once again dear friend |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ And ....... it does not get any more perfect than the sunset you've painted with your thoughts.  You are such an artist ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Rex Allen--Glad to help with those creative juices. Kamla--hey it's your turn...I already started..thanks for the breathlessness! Janet--It pleases me that you thought of me while looking at the moon...thanks sweet friend! Mark--I didn't know you painted...I would love to buy a painting...if they are as good as your words. Marge-Thanks for your always kind words of friendship and the beautiful graphic... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Your words always paint a beautiful picture in my mind! Denise |
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