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plahard
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since 2000-07-15
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0 posted 2000-07-15 12:58 PM



What will she say?

I think about her every minute,
I dream about her every night,
I want her by my side forever,
I don’t want her out of my sight.
What will she say?

I want to spend eternity in her arms,
Her heart beating next to mine.
Through the years mistakes have been made,
And solutions discovered with time.
What will she say?

Can she ever be happy with a guy like me?
In 50 years will she have any doubt?
I guess I’ll go ahead and pop the question.
That’s the only way to find out.
What will she say?


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plahard
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since 2000-07-15
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1 posted 2000-07-15 01:23 AM


In case you anyone is wondering...
The date is March 17th.  )

AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28
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Missing Since 1999
2 posted 2000-07-15 03:27 AM


I hope she says yes...nice poem.
.*.*.*.Kay.*.*.*.


"I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel."
~Touch and Go



ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

3 posted 2000-07-15 03:29 AM


Give this poem before you ask her and there won't be any questions ... Nice rhythem ...

My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.M.



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