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He calls to me
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He calls to me |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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He calls to me He calls to me across the miles Night winds carry his whispers They float on the breeze and through my windows Falling gently upon my ears ~Hush~ I hear him now. He calls to me from the heavens Glittering stars cannot compare to the sparkle of his eyes When he looks at me, I am consumed by the fire I see him now. He calls to me through my dreams Dancing together in the shadows of my sleep Where we laugh and love once again I am in his arms I feel him now. He calls to me Every moment of every day Distance couldn’t keep us apart When destiny drew us together I’ll hold him for eternity As long as he keeps calling. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is lovely!!! Glad to vote for this one.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tara this is exquisite so sensual and longing... very well expressed LOVE this poem going in my file great writing girl!! take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
PDV and Janet Marie, thank you for the comments (and the vote, PDV). As long as he inspires me, I'll keep writing. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
They say its really poetry when it feels like a memory and I remember feeling this way. ~Love your poem. <3 .*.*.*.Kay.*.*.*. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I love those distant whispers...soft and caressing words, Tara ~~Maureen |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Browneyes, this is simply beautiful and touching. You have yet another vote. Alicat |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Perfect Tara, just perfect. . . *sigh* Makes me want to go outside and start singing. . . Wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Hi Tara! This one beckons with the fire of a deep love, I really enjoy the melody...he calls to me... Thanks for sharing! JULIE I am a Life Purpose Coach who specializes in assisting men and women to clarify their Life Purpose and then in turn live true to their purpose. After 5 years working with the Severely Mentally Ill in County Mental Health, I gave up the bureaucracy (and safe, secure blanket) of this environment to pursue my own purpose and passion. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Maureen and Kay, thank you for the responses. Alicat, your support (and vote) are greatly appreciated. Sven, before you start warming up your vocal cords...can you sing?  We ladies love a serenade but it's so much better if you can actually carry a tune.Julie, thank you! You know how this man affects me. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Tara, This is gorgeaus, so very much loved it and the world would love it too. Voting Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is beautiful....it is sooo great to feel this way!!! I can relate!! Loved this!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nice to see you again, Tara |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
lovely poem ... with fantastic expression can really feel your excitement |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Cerenity, Bridgette and Rex: Thank you for taking the time to reply to my poem. Balladeer, I'm still around now and then. It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
...and I will keep calling to you for the rest of my life...thank you for writing such a beautiful expression of your love for me. I am proud (as well as flattered) that your talents are being published; you deserve the recognition. I love you. - Jeff |
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