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Heart's Plea
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Heart's Plea |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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~HEART'S PLEA~ Lost and found, is how I would describe my heart on that fateful day when you came into my life, when you loved me and wanted me, and desired all of me, you breathed me in and embraced my heart with yours, tenderly, you flew with me to the very ends of time and carried me along the path of happiness, but, now, I walk that path with you, but...alone, for, our hearts have grown distant, not fonder, time has changed our love and now laughs at the thought of eternal bliss, memories so bittersweet fall with my tears, so please be honest with me, if I am not the one that you've waited a lifetime for, let my heart hear those words, and although it may shatter, painfully slow, at least it will know the truth, I deserve that much after all that we have shared, so, I ask of you break not the heart that loves you give it strength to live for tomorrow, to live for you, to beat for our love, forevermore, but, if you must break it, do it gently with your arms open, to cradle the pieces, a heart so fragile needs a soft place to fall By Melissa Monette aka - Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Melissa, What a tender, beautifully written poem. So sad, yet just lovely. Bonnie |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, What a beautiful poem you have written. The plea of your heart comes through loud and clear. I hope your wish comes true.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OH girl what a hard hard thing to do....beautifully written |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
heartwrenching Melis, but so beautifully expressed tender and gentle take care sweet poet jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, this is wonderful. . . and sad. . . I pray my friend that you get only that which you ask for. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Oh you sound so sad, but still hopeful! Never lose that hope and keep writing so beautifully. ______________ memories so bittersweet fall with my tears, so please be honest with me, if I am not the one that you've waited a lifetime for, let my heart hear those words, _____________ Loved those lines .*.*.*.Kay.*.*.*. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem really reminds me of when I'm talking to Lena...when I tell her I love her I want her to tell me she loves me too...and even if she doesn't I want her to lie...because I will be shattered if the feelings are not mutual...I am not prepared right now for her to tell me she doesn't love me...perhaps somewhere down the road I will bear it...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you so much everyone for your kind replies Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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