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LiLOnE
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since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma

0 posted 2000-07-14 07:35 PM



My Shining Star  

You're my best friend,
My shining star.
I'd be lost without you,
And couldn't go very far.
~*~
You're there when I need you,
Through thick and thin,
Our bond is so strong,
No secrets within.
~*~
Two of a kind,
Yet so much like one.
So many pictures,
Of us having fun.
~*~
You're my shining star,
That gives me the light,
To lead me in the right direction,
When day turns to night.
~*~
Best Friends forever,
We'll always be
Inseparable from eachother
It's just you and me.
~*~



[This message has been edited by LiLOnE (edited 07-14-2000).]

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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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1 posted 2000-07-14 07:47 PM


That is how it should be..

HUGS

LiLOnE
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since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma
2 posted 2000-07-14 07:51 PM


HEHEHE AWWW  yeah it is... my dad used to always tell me you can count your TRUE
friends on one hand...well I figure if i can count just one!! I am all set  

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
3 posted 2000-07-14 11:34 PM


very well done LiLOnE,
good friends are a most important part of our lives and your friends are very lucky
Rich

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4 posted 2000-07-15 06:42 AM


LiLOnE~
This is a nice look at friendship.
Welcome to Passion's ...
you will find many friends here.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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5 posted 2000-07-21 10:52 PM


hehe.. I was always told - "You'll have three best friends if you're really lucky in this life - your parents - and hopefully one more"... Nice one, LiLOnE
Poet deVine
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6 posted 2000-07-21 11:04 PM


This is a great way to look at friendship. Well done!    
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