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essenceofangels
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 36


0 posted 2000-07-14 07:12 PM



My mother always told me
"love will find a way"
I believed her just untill today.

My father used to tell me
"Men will treat you right"
I always believed him untill tonight.

My sister always said to me
"you will find a man someday"
What else was I supposed to
think?

I used to believe it all
was true just untill
you came in my life
and stole it all away.




"Look back on time with kindly eyes"
"A word is dead
When it is said,
Some say.
I say it just
Begins to live
That day."


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RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
1 posted 2000-07-14 07:52 PM


Oh sweetheart...I feel for you but however much your mum or dad love you they can't always be right, nor your siblings...you just have to trust and trust again and hope one day that the trust is justified and that happiness will follow but sometimes it isn't so....Life is full of spectrums and one day all the rays will shine upon you...

Hugs

[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 07-14-2000).]

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-07-14 09:49 PM


EOA - what a beginning...it is up to you, and you alone, to see what next is done...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2000-07-14 10:42 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!  Wow, very strong words here.  Someday you will find that man.  Hang in there.

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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