»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #8
»
Right?
| Open Poetry #8 |
|
Right? |
|
|
IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
|
If I love her I would know it right? This is what I was thinking one night But I don't know it I know only that I think I do And if this is how I feel How can I think my love is true Maybe I can't know true love Maybe I can only believe in it |
||
| © Copyright 2000 IsGona - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
IsGona....... I enjoyed this one thoroughly!!! You captured all that indecision and wondering, and we've all felt that way. "Maybe I can only believe in it" As long as we believe, it exists!! (Nice work here, my friend) My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
||
|
IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Sunny, thanks alot. Even if your just saying it to make me happy it worked. I just recently started writing and it's something that I enjoy and helps me clear my mind but it's nice to know somebody actually enjoys it. thanks again IsGona |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IsGona~ Welcome to Passion's. A nice entrance with this poem. Reminded me of a Dean Wally verse - 'You say you think you love me and that sounds nice but phony. Love either is - or it isn't and thinking is baloney.' Is that brilliant - or what ?  Again I welcome you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Please check your email for a special message.  |
||
|
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Welcome to passions...I really like this...the doubt the indecision...it all comes through...and isnt that just like love to keep you on the edge of your seat? |
||
|
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Passions my friend. . . This is a wonderful poem. . . and yes, sometimes you do know. . . but most of the time, you have to ask. . . and that's half the fun. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
||
|
IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you all. You guys really make me feel welcome I've never claimed to be a poet but it I do enjoy writting and I just hope a few ppl may enjoy some of my work. Every one here is so talented and I really love reading every one elses posts. Thanks again, IsGona |
||
|
Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
This poem has been posted in multiple forums. If you'd like to reply to it, please do in the Teen forum. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
