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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Perpetual twinkle of the stars < !signature-->Erasing blood moon's pale scars Sending threads of pearled thought After dreams ne'er caught. Time held in crystal bonds Somewhere 'neath the glittering ponds Allowing phantoms from my soul To among the sleeping daisies grow. Ethereal being lights the dark Weeping, heart barren, stark 'Till from the shadows I emerge Letting my endless love surge. Our silhouettes now graced in gold Flying with memories of old Angel of light, mortal of earth Letting our love be rebirthed. The perpetual twinkle of the sky Knows what's true will never die For two hearts are bound forever Whether apart or together. *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perpetual poet envy LOL I should just be use to it by now right?  this is magnificent K, so well written and thought out... and a bit of a different style for you which is way cool love to watch ya grow *smile* someday I'll catch up later-perpetual perfect poet-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Alwye...... Very nicely written, and I keep reading.............. "For two hearts are bound forever.. Whether apart or together...." (that's beautifully put) My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Krista, the talent you possess!! This is beautiful.... oh and this... For two hearts are bound forever Wether apart or together. especially loved these two lines... Well Put!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very beautiful, Krista! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is so beautifully done Krista...your talent is a gift to all of us lucky enough to read...Thank you for sharing this~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Is it the water there or what? Have you ever written a bad poem? (I certainly don't think so!) This is great..I loved every line! Twinkle on!  |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Krista, this is beautiful (as always!!!)! Another jewel of a poem from you. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Krista, once again, I stand in awe of your talent! I absolutely love this poem, I have re-read it several times, it just flows of the tongue so beautifully. Shakespeares got nothin' on you, girl! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Silkdragon Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 65 |
*sighs* well, here you are again, krista. very well done. i feel stupid, cuz i say the same thing every time i read your poems. i have no idea how to say something constructive, cuz i'm no good at poetry. i just know i liked it. LOL! good job, and keep on writing! erin |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Beautiful poem Krissa. You used space well. If there is anybody that I love to read poetry from, it is you, m'dear! Tis a nice style as well! "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
JM- Thanks so much for your kindness, I always love receiving replies from you! Sunny1- I'm glad you enjoyed! Maree- Thank you much my friend, I appreciate it! Martie- Thanks! Butterflies- Thank you also! Poet deVine- hmm...maybe there is somethin in the minnesota water....that Dusk Treader is a phenomenal writer yanno...  LoveBug- Thank you much, my friend! Melissa- Thanks for your reply, they're always a delight to read! Erin- Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it! Cassers- Thank you too my friend! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Ah, another beauty of a poem Krista! Your talent is superb... I love that web of imagery you weave.. "Crystal bonds" and "silhouettes now graced in gold," ahh.. I love it! Hmm. and SilkDragon on that list of Minnesotans.. maybe we should bottle our water and sell it? Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
You m'dear, will always twinkle... and I'll love ya as long as ya keep giving me things to point out!!! Wether apart or together. That would be "whether! Cool Krista! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Abrahm- Thank you so much, love! And lol, we should bottle and sell our water! we could make millions, whahaha! Chris- Thank you so much for your kindness, and pointing the spelling error out too, although Abrahm beat ya to it and it's already fixed! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Krista, your poetry is always just as smooth as silk and this one is certainly no exception. Wonderful writing..... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Perpetual magic, Krista. You're writing always flows so softly on the invisible line between emotion and grace... Such is pure beauty to the reader. Life is grand, is it not? So happy to see you writing of "love and lovely things" these days... Michael |
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