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That's All |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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That’s All she smiles eyes crinkle whispers hello he hears he sees he sighs heart be still |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
simplicity at its best ... thanks Sunshine ... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Today, I'm simple...thanks, MA! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Silent words Cool breeze Brings forth Heart at ease. Soul given Promise made Thoughts even Words none said. Silence had lend Its glorious words Honour to defend Promise with sword. he heard he saw he sighed At Her smiles Crinkled eyes Said Hi! ..... take a look at this now.... its only words they say, but then they flow from sheer inspiration.... need I say more to tell you how much I enjoyed the depth of your simplicity in words... Karilea, My regards, Sudhir. [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, I came I saw I concurred. I love it  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sometimes less IS more... cool poem Sun.... enjoyed the sweet simplicity of it jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Simple definitely works with this one. Way to go. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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I thank you, one and all, Sudhir, Balladeer, Janet and Mark... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
my twin..... You are never simply 'simple'..... You are however, simply elegant, for elegance lies in simplicity! My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sunny1, wow, thanks! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I wish I could complement you as well as sunny1 did, but... very well done. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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IsGona, it is always the thought that matters! Thank you... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Yep, I dream of the t-shirt...keep the wishes under my pillow.. HUSG |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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That's a great "T" m'friend... now go out and prosper... you have my blessings... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful sentiments!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lone Wolf, thank you! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
In your simplicity, there is much beauty. . . Just wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That says it all, Karilea! This is sweet! Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Simply quite beautiful Sunshine...enjoyed thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, denise, tracie, thank you ALL for coming in to read this... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Could this "be" any more perfectly penned? Bravo Sunshine! Loved this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kit, thanks for your "be"autiful comment... |
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