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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 2000-07-14 11:15 AM



I never met someone like you
In my life before
you came to me,
There was nothing,
Now I've found you,
All my life ,
I've been waiting for you,
Now I've found love,
The kind of love,
I always wanted ,
My dreams came true,
Here,being close to you,
I never thought,
you will come to me,
And you'll give me
the kind love
I always dreamnt of,
All my life,
I've been waiting for you,
Now,you're here,
Holding my hand,
Never felt like this before,
You give me love
as the night grew colder,
You hold me tight,
All my life,
only for you,
I live for you,
you give me love,
As time goes by,
All my life,
I've been waiting for you,
All my life,

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-07-14 01:14 PM


Wow this smells of love, this speaks of love, this points to love... so lovely, utterly romantic...

nice work, vandana...

regards, sudhir

LiLOnE
Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma
2 posted 2000-07-14 01:37 PM


Vandana,
   I love you poem! It acctually describes how I feel  right now perfectly! I hope to see more of your poems.. Keep it up!!

                     ~*~LiLOnE~*~



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-07-14 03:01 PM


Vandanna you don't know how much I wish I could find a woman as devoted as you that would speak those lovely words to me....James
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-07-14 03:37 PM


This man would kill to have a love such as this.  This is so romantic.  Wonderful pen your heart carries.
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
5 posted 2000-07-15 04:18 PM


Very pretty... Hopes he feels the same way.. If only every one could find a love like yours..

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-07-15 05:19 PM


Hi VanDana~
Glad to see your smiling heart in here.
Hope all is well in big ole' Atlanta !
Nice to read your romantic little self !
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-07-15 11:18 PM


Superb vandana. . . you wear your heart on your sleeve. . . and it shows wonderfully in this one. . .

Excellent. . .

------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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8 posted 2000-07-15 11:32 PM


I think this is my favorite of yours Vandana, very lovely!

Denise

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