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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 2000-07-14 05:16 AM




Every time I see your face
I realize how weak I can be.
If only I could speak the words
then maybe you'd be able to see.

I just want to kiss your lips
as you hold me in your arms.
Make me laugh and smile
with your tender eyes and charm.

Hold me close to your body
make me forget about my day.
Show me that you're interested
then maybe I'll find the way.

I want to tell you how I feel
how I think of you all the time.
But there's no way I can tell you
with just a simple rhyme.

I only want you to hold me
I want to belong to you.
I hope that maybe one day
you'll feel this way too.


If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Lynn Bonham - All Rights Reserved
Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
1 posted 2000-07-14 06:50 AM


~A lovely poem...keep it up~

Blessed Be,
Beth

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2 posted 2000-07-15 11:38 PM


I can feel the longing in this one. . .

Just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-16 12:09 PM


Lynn.......

         One can't help but feel the longing
in this beautiful poem...
      (I think the person you wrote it for
       would see how special it is, too...)

            Very nice..........


Your words become music to my soul......



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