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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2000-07-14 04:16 AM


Tonight's the living
Where is the fued?
Come over the side
Where there is no time.
Oh hurry, hurry
Please come down to see.
Tonight's the living
Here are the few.

You sit and seek
For nothing is sure.
Tonight is coming
After so long.
Come close, come here
I wish I were you.
Tonight is coming
Where is the feud?

I see the heartache
For I rarely understand.
Under canopies
Of graveyard flowers.
Under hellstones
That keep me alive.
I'm kicking, I'm running too wild
Where is the fire?


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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-07-15 12:48 PM


loved the last verse of this---had a frenzied feel that I could really relate too.
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-15 12:53 PM


Michael G.....

      That last verse grabbed me, also...

         Nice writing....I like your style!


Your words become music to my soul......



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