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The Two Sides Of My Heart
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The Two Sides Of My Heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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My heart has two sides, One keeps secrets, The other confides, My heart has two sides, One loves one, The other hides, My heart has two sides, One holds memories, The other in disguise, My heart has two sides, One of truth, One of lies, My heart has two sides, One is narrow, The other wide, Into my heart, You will see, Two loves inside of me, Which one will it be? Heart of stone? Heart of glass? Which love will last? Can love forget the past? Or does fate decide? Half a heart, Cannot be true love , I must decide, No Longer will my feelings hide, For my heart has two sides. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is truely beautiful and so very true. It is something that must be faced and can take an eternity of time sometimes before that can freely be answered. Loved it. Nice to see one of yours posted again. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Well, we all live dual lives... one-half for self and the other for the world, and at certain key times, we have to decide which half to favour... these moments are the most crooked.... I would often go your way... adn no longer hide... lovely poem... adn as you can see thought-provoking indeed... regards to you Romantic Heart, Sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
A Romantic Heart........ I do love the way you wrote this. It flows like music, and it feels good to read........ Many compliments on this!!!! My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH, We all have two sides to our hearts. Just have to decide which to be true to. I am sure you will make the right decision my friend. Wonderful writing.  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
This reminds me of a heard that can't decide. Maybe neither side is right. Look to the ocean dear heart, as D.H. Lawrence said the ocean contains the hottest blood of all. Did I say I decend from the ocean....  great poem, I loved it. Parker. Logging on by the ocean these days. So I thought I'd tease, is it working. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sounds like a troubled heart....liked this!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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