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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2000-07-13 01:46 PM


      
            

           Poetry runs in the family....
           It's a passionate family, you see....
           The children are scattered all over....
           And they're passionate....
                 (that includes me!)


           For some may find family bonding....
           And some just need comfort and care....
           But all who come sit at this table....
           Know someone will always be there....


           The words that we love are inspiring....
           Our table serves up food for thought....
           Whatever the taste you're desiring....
           You'll find it here, like it or not!!


           Our passionate table is noisy....
           Speak up if you want to be heard!
           The more that you read, and the
                   more you reply,
             will add volume to your posted
                      words..........


           So, here's to our passionate family!
           We all bid you welcome, within....
           Come sit with us here at our table....
           It's time for the meal to begin!!

                   (thank you twin!)
< !signature-->

My heart is an open book
  ....take a look....



[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-13-2000).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-07-13 01:52 PM


I think this is great...just be careful who sits next to whom...I suspect a food fight from a few of these guys....lol...nicely penned...I vote, would be great addition to the book.
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-07-13 01:57 PM



  Thanks, Serenity!! Sometimes it's fun
        just to have fun........
     (look out for the flying meatballs!!)


My heart is an open book
....take a look....


LngJhnAg
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3 posted 2000-07-13 01:58 PM


Sunny One - Yanno, I've been writing bad poems about kitties... may I just go straight to bed without dinner???  *veg*

This is a very good intro poem for the book.  Voted as was your In-Between poem

Sunnyone
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4 posted 2000-07-13 02:01 PM


  
   Thanks, Long John..(did I guess it right?)

          No desert until you eat your
                    peas!!!!!!!


My heart is an open book
....take a look....


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2000-07-13 04:32 PM


Wow! Look at this?! I inspired THIS? Wish I could inspire ME!

Looks like I will need to work quite hard to match my "twin!"

All jealousy aside, I am quite impressed...I may have to come back quite a few times just to see what accollades you so rightful deserve and will surely receive!





Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Jeffrey Carter
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6 posted 2000-07-13 05:35 PM


*voted
Sunnyone
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7 posted 2000-07-13 10:04 PM


Sunny.......

        Yes, you did this---and thank you!
  It was fun......your words are a great
  compliment, especially since I admire
  your writing so very much!!!

          (How did you do that neat
               icon animation at the
                    bottom???)


Jeffrey.......thankyou for your vote!!!!!


My heart is an open book
....take a look....


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