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Pretend with me
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Pretend with me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Pretend with me I found the Key to Ibsen's light. The fiction flight, of reunite. I'll take you there by my side It's only the truth I hide. I've dreamed of you in absentee, In dull and dreary ennui. And wish to close that chasm door And fly above that canyons floor. I would make a shadow true, In that way perform a coup. And challenge you, be with me there, Like Ibsen in his love affair. Pretend we are the same of age. Pretend we walk a common stage. Go back to meetings of our last Pretend that time had never past. Pretend that this is really true And I will surely be with you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a plea from the soul's innermost parts... Well done Seymour, my friend regards, Sudhir |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is lovely seymour...and a sweet daydream too. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh how very wonderful I have permission now to be a child again and pretend somehow that I can be where I want and whom I care to be so I will close my eyes and be part of Sy's poetry... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a beautiful poem. I'm sure you'll have a lot of takers on that offer Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Beautiful comment. Serenity, Thank you *L* Sunshine, anytime. *L* Elizabeth, Well at least one. Love Sy |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--I love to pretend...do it all the time...can I be too....part of your rhyme? Liked the poem, Sy! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ecellent read and I am sure that you will get more than one offer to your quest. Enjoyed much |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Well - I am NOT pretending ..... I like your poetry !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Why of cource. *L* Mark, As you can see, I did. Marge, I'll see you in the next pretend. *L* |
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