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First Time We Met
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First Time We Met |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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"FIRST TIME WE MET" There you were sitting there, You are beautiful, like a picture in my dreams. Your radiance shown through your beauty, You are more than I could ever believe. I spoke your name and you turned, Stared at me with soft blue eyes. Mine met yours and in an instant, We knew this love would never die. You arose and came towards me, A hello, a hug, and soft kiss. We both knew from that moment, Nothing again would ever be amiss. We touched our hands together, My fingers intertwined with yours. Walking together down this new path, There will be no more hearts with closed doors. A wet tear came down your face, The breeze carried it through the air. I could see it as it journeyed, And reached out and grabbed it, as I cared. A tear of sadness I would throw away, A tear of joy I would keep. Then I would hold you ever so close, And watch, as you peacefully sleep. A journey of two hearts together, Melting into each other, as they will. Not knowing the path where it ends, But caring enough to climb over that hill. Bill Charles |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A tear of sadness I would throw away, A tear of joy I would keep. Then I would hold you ever so close, And watch, as you peacefully sleep. A journey of two hearts together, Melting into each other, as they will. Not knowing the path where it ends, But caring enough to climb over that hill. ---------------------- this is SO beautiful.. a wonderful reflection of when soul-mates were found... the moment when 2 become one... very well written... Welcome to Passions Bill, so very nice to meet you. look forward to reading more of your work take care jm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bill..... I always look forward to your writings, and this one is as beautiful as anything I've read..... I loved it, as usual!! My heart is an open book ....take a look.... |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful peice of writing. absolutely wonderful!!! Oh, to find a love like that..... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Janet Marie, Kind words as yours keeps the fingers flowing over this keyboard. Thank you so much, and thank you for the welcome. It's nice to meet you and it's great to be here. Sunny1 I always look forward to your replies, as you always inspire me with your kind words. Thank you again and again. Martini, Thank you for taking the time to reply. A love like that does exist for you, it's out there waiting to be found. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...if only Lena would follow this plan...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, this is beautiful and romantic. I loved this, please take my vote. I only hope that one day I will have a love like this  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ There are some really pretty thoughts tucked away in this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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