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One In A Million... (My 4,000th Post)
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One In A Million... (My 4,000th Post) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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ONE IN A MILLION Whisper to me softly, Tell me something I don't know. Take my hand, come dance with me, Let the emotion flow. Touch me with the wispy feel Of velvet clouds in light. Kiss me once to show it's real, This sense of sheer delight. Tilt your head back gently As the soul within me cries - As I sink into the mystery Of heaven in your eyes. Dance across my dreams this night In silver shades of blue. Spread your wings in angelic flight For God knows I love you. And every touch and every tear, Every moment we share, I'll always hold priceless and dear As an answer to prayer. Lying here next your silk soft skin, Falling to your heart beating. I hold time ever crystalline To a feeling ne'er fleeting... As against all odds, against all fates, We've somehow found each other. As the morning sweetness emanates Our love for one another. As I watch you open up your eyes, And I'm taken by the gleaming... As I kiss your lips and realize, That even wide awake, I'm dreaming. Michael Anderson [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perhaps one of your best...ever...why can't I write like this...ah well, I guess because there can only be one Michael... You've outdone yourself, Congratulations on your 4000th post! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow Michael...this is just beautiful... really well done my friend... voted!  K |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
There is only one Chosen One... One in a trillion... regards, sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whisper to me softly, Tell me something I don't know. Take my hand, come dance with me, Let the emotion flow. Touch me with the wispy feel Of velvet clouds in light. Kiss me once to show it's real, This sense of sheer delight. ------------------ And every touch and every tear, Every moment we share, I'll always hold priceless and dear As an answer to prayer. Lying here next your silk soft skin, Falling to your heart beating. I hold time ever crystalline To a feeling never fleeting... As against all odds, against all fates, We somehow found each other. As the morning sweetness emanates Our love for one another. As I watch you open up your eyes, And I'm taken by the gleaming... As I kiss your lips and realize, That even wide awake, I'm dreaming ---------------- *smiling from ear to ear* *floating* what a incredibly BEAUTIFUL way to start my day ... my my my ...love ya when your in love baby *smile* PERFECT M,...HEAVENLY Congrats on your 4000th... (i better get to posting ... or your gonna catch up with me) (hehe) *wink wink* LOL  later-one in a million-gator jm |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
4000......CONGRATS!!! This poem is breathtaking Michael...such love and beauty wrapped within it's folds, the dream of finding love like you never thought possible~ Wonderful work Michael~ |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Michael, despite the Darkness within, you have painted an exquisitely romantic piece here. Wow....you definately got my vote. Alicat |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
congrats Michael...so glad this is a happy one...hugs to you. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely...voting!!!! |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
From a newcomer, I say congrats and certainly the perfect piece to commemorate your 4000th post ... Nice work ... Lying here next your silk soft skin ... Michael, I wanted to put a "to" between "next" and "your", in the above line ... Forgive me if I'm presupposing ... |
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decardes New Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 7singapore |
such a beuatiful poem about love. one of the best i have read so far |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
GOOD LORD IN HEAVEN!!!! Michael, you've outdone yourself. Kathleen |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Michael~ Congratulations on 4000!!! This is yet another love filled happy poem to give my heart a sigh......loved it! -SEA*****VOTE***** Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o man uplifting i like it its gotta be a fave of mine |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Michael - you have a way with words that brings so much of your poetic soul into the light. great job on this. You've a vote from me. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Michael, Truly magnificent as always  *V |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Tilt your head back gently As the soul within me cries -" Incredibly beautiful Micheal! What an exquisite feeling this elicits, the ecstasy is almost painful when you finally find what you have been searching for ... (click) Best wishes, /Kit |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Michael... this is my favutite... I love it... such a wonderful flow and such a lovely dream charming... see ya around If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
Congrats on the milestone Michael, and what a superb poem to achieve it with. Great job friend. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Beautiful, just beautiful. *sigh* ~H |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Y'are one in a mill yerself m'bro! Dance across my dreams this night In silver shades of blue. You knew that one would get me! Sweeeeeet! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is so filled with love and honesty of the heart. You are truely gifted and I admire your talent. My favorite verse: Tilt your head back gently As the soul within me cries - As I sink into the mystery Of heaven in your eyes. Dance across my dreams this night In silver shades of blue. Spread your wings in angelic flight For God knows I love you. Gotta love it as a whole also. Congrats on your milestone. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Michael this is lovely and when you find that special one they do seem like one in a million...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Michael, Congrads on the 4000th post, a beautiful poem it is a pleasure as always to read your words. And as usual I am at a loss for words and breathless when it comes for the time to post a reply. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Michael - I'm with Christopher on this one.. This is getting scary ... I'm agreeing with him much too much lately...  Truly, truly, four grand claps!!... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
First you have my congratulations on reaching 4,000! Next, this was absolutely stunning! How romantic, it's nice to see something light come around! If you're feeling like this Michael, then I'm jumping for joy for you! God bless you, and you know ya got my vote [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Michael~ Come out and take a bow ! The audience is on it's feet ! Wonderful ! Encore ! I see that smile ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Just beautiful, Michael. It's written love. Congrats on 4000! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Congratulations, Michael....on everything |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Breathtakingly beautiful, Michael! Voting! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Michael, CONGRATULATIONS ON 4000!!!! This is stunning . . . you best yet in my opinion. You have my vote for sure. Sigh . . . Fabulous writing my friend. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And this poem is one in a million!! Sort of etheral almost!! As usual superb my friend. And congrats on the big 4000th!! I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - what an overwhelming response. This has been a special time in my life, (falling in love with Kess), and I am so glad to have such wonderful friends to share it with in my poetry. I wish to say thank you to ALL of you. Michael |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Michael, this is absolutley gorgeous...I loved the lines- "I hold time ever crystalline To a feeling ne'er fleeting..." I am truly glad that you've found happiness my friend. Congrats on 4000 posts too!  *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This is what it's all about. Any words of praise I could come up with would never do this poem justice, m'friend. Stunning! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Well... this is the best I've read in a long while. you are very talented and I can only dream to right one poem a third as godd as this one. well done. |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
You're definitely one in any million.. HUSG |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Michael, Very sweet and superbly done, Congrats on your 4,000th! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...may the memories begin... all my best... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtaking! Absolutely beautiful, Michael! I've now got a new favorite of yours! Congratulations on 4,000, too! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Michael, I sincerely wish that I had seen this piece in time to vote for it. I'm sure it has a place in the book anyway though. This one just blew me away, so exquisite and loving. I'm glad you have something so happy to write about now. You touched my soul with this one. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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