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Cuddlez
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0 posted 2000-07-13 12:00 PM


"I'm Sorry"

I'm sorry,
I can tell you I'm sorry in so many ways.
I'm sorry I've changed.

I apologize for treating you bad.
My friend, I love you.

I don't, and I can't stand losing you.
I would give anything to be able to
put things back the way they were.
But I can't.

You say you haven't changed,
I say we both have.
My dear friend, I dont want to lose you.
So how can I say I'm sorry?

I want to be the person I once was.
I'm just not me anymore.

It's hard for me to say it,
But I don't know if we can work things out.

Regardless, of everything, I'm sorry I hurt you.
You hurt me too, I struck back.

I'm hurting for things that aren't your fault.
But, I'm striking out at you for the same reason.
Please, forgive me.
I'm so very sorry.

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Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.




[This message has been edited by Cuddlez (edited 07-15-2000).]

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-07-13 12:49 PM


Cuddlez...

      It's hard to apologize for being your-
self, and I really like the way you put it
into words here!
                    So well-written.....


Life is but a dream...
so sleep easy...



Jamie
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168
Blue Heaven
2 posted 2000-07-13 12:59 PM


At least you could say the words..
lots of people choke on them

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-07-13 05:28 AM


very well written and a wonderful way to apologize...well done~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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Walla Walla, WA 99362
4 posted 2000-07-13 11:11 AM


Thank you VERY much for your replies. I wrote this a lonnnnnnnnggggggg time ago when I was at a cross roads in my life concerning a guy and me. Nothing ever happened and I realize it was REALLY for the better )

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Cuddlez
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5 posted 2000-07-14 01:32 AM



Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
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Nashville
6 posted 2000-07-14 04:06 AM


great write!!  have gone through this and yep it still feels like that.  so very well put.
vandana
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7 posted 2000-07-14 11:40 AM


Well written!!!!!! I loved this one.!!!!!
Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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Walla Walla, WA 99362
8 posted 2000-07-15 04:16 PM


Thank you for your replies Vandanna and Michael.. Looking forward to reading your poetry )

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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