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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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0 posted 2000-07-12 11:37 PM



Just take me away......to mountains or seas
Bring me to the ocean where I can feel the salty breeze
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Lay me on the warm sand and just look into me
Tell me I’m all you ever dreamed I would be
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Let my love pour over you like sweet rain
Let me take away your sorrow and pain
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Join my dreams for a moment and walk the stars
Take this key to my heart and unchain the bars
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Protect me from myself with your arms of steel
Allow me to bask in your warmth and for a moment heal
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Love me like today is my last day to live
Let me devote to you till there’s nothing left to give
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And when your done I shall set you free
Because that's where an angel should always be
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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-07-12 11:50 PM


"Love me like today is my last day to live
Let me devote to you till there’s nothing left to give"

This is a beautiful piece, my friend. I hope you find your "angel" soon.  

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-07-12 11:59 PM


Lay me on the warm sand and just look into me
Tell me I’m all you ever dreamed I would be
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Let my love pour over you like sweet rain
Let me take away your sorrow and pain
------------------
Love me like today is my last day to live
Let me devote to you till there’s nothing left to give
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
And when your done I shall set you free
Because that's where an angel should always be
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

my my..angels and butterflies....
now how can ya be more poetic than that  
this is lovely girly-girl...
such gentle sweet devotion and longing
we all need a guardian angel to watch over us
and butterfly kisses aint half bad either  
later SS gator
jm

I think I could need - this in my life
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
there's a little bit of something me
In everything in you
MB20

EagleOne
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Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
3 posted 2000-07-13 12:07 PM


Oh this is just so beautiful. I know your angel watches over you. Take care my friend!  

God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown



Alwye
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In the space between moments
4 posted 2000-07-13 01:00 AM


So gorgeous, butterflies....angel wings fit you as well as butterfly wings, my friend.  Beautiful words, keep up the exellent work, for I always love to read it.   < !signature-->

*Krista Knutson*

"We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~


[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 07-13-2000).]

Jamie
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Blue Heaven
5 posted 2000-07-13 01:09 AM


Swept up into your dream.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".


CocoBaci
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6 posted 2000-07-13 01:15 AM


Simply elegant ... need I say more!

Coco

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
7 posted 2000-07-13 02:37 AM


Bdc- you know me well enough to know just howspecial this one is to me. It is a gorgeous write and I agree with the others--you wear angel's wings as well as you do butterfly wings.  I am sure we all noticed how soft both of these are too.

Join my dreams for a moment and walk the stars
Take this key to my heart and unchain the bars
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Protect me from myself with your arms of steel
Allow me to bask in your warmth and for a moment heal

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
8 posted 2000-07-13 04:58 AM


butterflies~
beauty lies here in this special piece  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
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9 posted 2000-07-13 08:38 AM



LoveBug* Thank you so much.....I hope so too  

J.M.*  Butterfly kisses and angels......yep
you are right...what could be
better...well.....don't answer that   Thank you for reading my sweet S.S.~

Eagle*  My dear friend thankyou so much for
your reply, I too believe my angel
watches...among the stars and upon the
highest cloud***

Krista*  Thank you very much.....a winged
wonder.....lol not so sure about that but the
compliment is lovely  

Jamie*  Somethings are better left as a dream
that way there is no disappointment.....thank
you for reading~

Coco*  Thank you for saying so much with so
little I appreciate your thoughts and that you read~

Mark* Soft yes......but the drycleaning bill is outrageous!!    I'm so very glad you
enjoyed the prace through my heart.  Thank
you for reading and your kind reply~

tracie*  Thank you from the bottom of my
heart~



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