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Silent Song
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Silent Song |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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No more not I another word... tonite retires love absurd... not one more instant one more glimpse... of your heart in simpleness... Take your leave-- why linger on? eating now my own advice, I submit-- what thrill is this? Never have I spoken lie... Singing now, my silent song... Alone I sing. Alone, I long... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Alone, I sing....alone, I long It gets no better than this. Beautiful, Serenity... |
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Adrienne Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 20California |
Lovely, Serenity, quite lovely, indeed.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this one aches me twin... simple heart of simple mind sometimes we just dont get it we just cant hear each other but theres nothin simple bout the pain keep singing baby... theres always someone listening in the wind hugs...and love me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank ye, thank ye, very much...love to you. It is much appreciated. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sing out silent song for there is one that hears your voice above the maddening throng superb my friend. . .just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
sing silent, sing strong, I will sing along. very good Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I agree with 'deer, gets no better than this. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
superb heartfelt longing... lovely work, serenity... regards, sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- No more not I another word... tonite retires love absurd... not one more instant one more glimpse... of your heart in simpleness... Take your leave-- why linger on? eating now my own advice, I submit-- what thrill is this? Never have I spoken lie... Singing now, my silent song... Alone I sing. Alone, I long... I too hear your silent song and it is one of those sad classics that we love so much. Very heartfelt and sends out so much power. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Hello Serenity ... Beautiful stream of thoughts ... nice style ... |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
sing not alone Serenity but with those who love you. great poem Rich |
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