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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-07-12 12:35 PM


            The Kiss    

I lie below a white sky.
Under the light of noon.
Rorsahak clouds nestle and fly.
And I am near to swoon.

She lies my side rose bud lips
And I am near to swoon.
Touching her with finger tips
Under the light of noon.

My heart pains torment and bliss
Under the light of noon
Bending down to steal a kiss
And I am near to swoon.

Do I dare these lips in haste
Under the light of noon.
Do I dare these lips to taste
And I am near to swoon.

Will she allow this tete-a-tete,
Or has the moment past in wait?



© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-07-12 12:40 PM


ahh- the hesitation;  remember it is like the calm before the storm.  Hope you got that kiss.  Great read.
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
2 posted 2000-07-12 01:25 PM


The lingering moment before the kiss, the excitement of it all....

by the way did you get it?


regards to you seymour,
sudhir.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-12 05:00 PM



There's nothing as sweet as a kiss.......

        Did she kiss you first??

    (loved this piece!!!!)


Life is but a dream...
so sleep easy...



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-07-12 05:09 PM


Ahhh I just love a man who plays with his rhyme  
very very cool Sy-guy
swoon to the moon ...
and for crying out loud KISS THE GIRL!! LOL
superb writing Sy
later-lip-gator
jm

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-07-12 06:34 PM


Mark, Yes

Sudhir, Yes

Sunny1, Yes

Janet, OK gator aid.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
6 posted 2000-07-12 08:16 PM


Glad you got your kiss, because it resulted in this lovely poem
LIz

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2000-07-13 07:28 AM


Elizabeth,
Yes I did and thank you.
Love Sy

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
8 posted 2000-07-13 07:39 AM


Swooning just reading your lovely sentiments Sy ... beautiful and tantalizing read!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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