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angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
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0 posted 2000-07-12 11:49 AM


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N.b. -
I was very annoyed when I wrote this and it isn't aimed at any of you lot as you are the only people who keep me sane . I had to cut it quite heavily so the flow is not quite so good, you'll have to use your imagination on the original word or ask me to e-mail them to you as I have no wish of puting them up in a place of such piece and harmony . At the time I was getting a lot of harsh comments aimed at me and people pushing there views on me, I hope that helps you understand some of it . If not, e-mail me .

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The arrogance surrounding me .

How sad you are,
That you must say,
Such rubbish,
And such crud,
Your mouth is like a garbage shute,
I think you are a twit .
If I was gay,
Then I’d be proud,
At least I’d be myself,
You can only take the view,
That’s been of conie,
Wealth,
I feel for you,
You arrogant sod,
Which is more than others do .
All men are created equal inside,
You think you are the best,
Get a life,
You insensitive git .
Give us all a rest .

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I pity you and
all your kind, open your eyes and see the world outside of your own small
insignificant one and maybe you’ll find the respect of others who walk
un-blindfolded down the path of life .




Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

© Copyright 2000 angelswing - All Rights Reserved
ma miller
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806

1 posted 2000-07-12 12:05 PM


angelswing ... I think the message comes across loud and clear ... some people can be so "un-human".
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-07-12 12:33 PM


okay already, I'll change LOL .  Now do you feel better?  I hope so.  I have found that those who are quick to judge feel guilty about their own lives and try to make it better by condeming others.  I think you got your point across in this one...Next time don't be so shy!!!!!
serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-07-12 12:36 PM


Hey...I'm all for a good rant, angelswing...I'm glad to see I'm not the only one...great job.
crucifix kiss
Junior Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 14
uk
4 posted 2000-07-15 07:05 AM


hi tom
      i hope i am not one of the people this is aimed at , if i am i am very sorry . cya mate

"and as it was with all things, we spoke in rhyme and riddle. Not for fear of detection, for that had happened very long ago, but rather that those wh

angelswing
Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
5 posted 2000-07-26 05:33 PM


Thanks all of you, as I said it ain't aimed at any of you . i just get excessively ennoyed with how little some people know, understand or care ( and I don't mean lack of intelligence, I mean lack of open mindedness As they can't see or don't care that what they do affects and hurts others ) .
Sorry to bore you all with my ranting and raving, I'll stop now .
L.of.L. Tom .
P.s. The part about conservativism is a bit steriotypical and it obviosly does not apply to all or probably not even the majority of people who believe or live that way - I'm not just having a knock at conservatives, I just hold very strong communistic views ( pieceful ones ) and believe that if the world was more balenced it would be a better place .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

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