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ShOrTy
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since 2000-07-12
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0 posted 2000-07-12 11:27 AM


Boy did I doupt that we'd come to this,
Your loving embrace I now have to miss
I dream every night of just laying with you
I hope I share the same feeling you do
Just watching you fall asleep in my arms
Protecting you from an array of world harms
I know that your safe just staying with me
Something just tells me that we are meant to be
And now I am here and with so muvh to say
I cannot protect my love from harms way
But yet there is hope and it lies in one phrase
That keep's me strong through these tough          
                                                   gloomy days
But no one can prove my love is untrue
Thank god for that awesome saying
                      " I love you  "

            Benjamin Charles Way

© Copyright 2000 Melody Smith - All Rights Reserved
Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2000-07-12 11:32 AM


I loved this one!!

excellent writing!!

Those three little words are quite amazing aren't they!!  

Very romantic and lovely

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2000-07-12 09:13 PM


Another lovely Melody..
Sylvester
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since 1999-11-11
Posts 16

3 posted 2000-07-13 06:59 AM


What a dreamy place. Nice work here, ShOrTy..
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