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ShOrTy
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since 2000-07-12
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0 posted 2000-07-12 10:15 AM


Here I am so far Away
I never thought I'd be here today
but never the less I'm here all alone
I still can't believe it my mind has been blown
How on this great earth could I part with you
A question you must be asking yourself too
I know I'll get by, one day at a time
I'll ease this away with my cool gentle rhyme
Just knowing one day our eyes will soon meet
Just gives me that feeling I know I can't beat
My friends, family, and now my love too
I'm tested to see if I'm willing to come through
I know all the dangers that will lie ahead
I simply focus on winning instead
To some it may be quite harder to miss
But I know the finish result in your kiss
I cannot pass up all the joys that me be
We have been destined to end happily
                            
                 Benjamin Charles Way


[This message has been edited by ShOrTy (edited 07-12-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-07-12 10:39 AM


Welcome to Passions.  This was a great read and I will look forward to reading more from you.  
Martini
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-07-12 11:25 AM


This was a great read
nice work
I'm looking forward to reading more form you

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
3 posted 2000-07-12 11:27 AM


WOW, what an entrance WELCOME,

And long may you stay,
It sounds as if life's making you pay,
Oh never mind then,
You'll always know when,
Until that time comes,
Come join in the fun,
And right some more poems for me .

Nicly written . i really enjoyed reading the poem as it had a lot of depth and meaning .
L.of.L. Tom .


Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2000-07-12 12:26 PM


Your poetry sings... Like a Melody...
May I formally welcome you to this Passionate Place - I, too, hope you  hang around - Your work is really good.. Check your email for a special greeting, OK??


JulieAnn
Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!
5 posted 2000-07-12 01:50 PM


this so very sweet and so sad!! I loved it!!!! so many words that speak to me!!! thank you fo rsharing an dwelcome to passions!!! I look forward to reading more form you!!!  

Julie :)



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