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EroseGrover
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0 posted 2000-07-12 06:09 AM


The Sunrise beams extrodinary
colors through our sky
Sunshine fills our blessed land
and warms our naked hand

the clouds up above bring
more love to the day

The sweet wind blows so
swiftly and sleek bringing
our mind to a calm

As the Sunset brings our day adiu
it brings the blessed night sky with it to.


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Jan
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since 2000-06-14
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1 posted 2000-07-12 09:11 AM


Lovely poem-great imagery
essenceofangels
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since 2000-07-12
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2 posted 2000-07-12 09:20 AM


Wondereful poem absoulutly loved it!
It express a love of diffrent things
very good keep it up!
                essenceofangels
      

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