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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Mountains I've seen the mountains and a sunset like I have never known before And how true to know that awesome breeze Ive forever waited for I have found the many fields where the flowers never die Where each new breath I took they learned to dance before my eyes... I've been on clouds that lie so perfect in the blue sky up above I've touched peace there with both these hands and held the purest love Ive reached the endless places on a swing made just for me And God I've tasted freedom just as far as I could see... I have walked along a beach where each wave would speak your name And never has the voice of grace ever sound the same I've been led to live the night where I have never known to be And stood beneath three golden moons hanging just for me... Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that path each time; that's where my angel sleeps And never have you seen the light far more brighter then the sun How it cradles every single move so silently and calm... I'm never lost, I'm always held, I can find my way back home It i's the hand upon my shoulder that I can never be alone I've been handed once again the sweetest promise of them all That I'll be held before the fire and safely after the fall... So there' is no right way or no wrong way to cry When such harmony and patience are always by your side And never will you have to search for life without the words For nighttime calls you blessed when inside that heart of hers... Saundra Sauni :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Saunni.......... You have great depth in your writing, enough to reach out and shake my soul! The very last verse was my favorite... I'll be looking forward to more..... Life is but a dream... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Saundra, WELCOME TO PASSIONS  Liked your first post pretty much... Expecting many more to come... Hope you have an enjoyable time here, regards, sudhir< !signature--> Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-12-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Saunni~ You've got some wonderful thoughts tucked away within your poem. Welcome to Passion's ... enjoy your stay. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Saunni, Reading your poem I felt a calmness in your words. Thank you, and please continue with your writing. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Saunni- I really liked getting lost in this one and the calmness was so refreshing. Welcome to Passions and I look forward to your other works. Great start here with us. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you!  Please check your email. |
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