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0 posted 2000-07-11 10:48 PM


Crossing of hands,
To this ever glazing bands,
Churning of water,
Wonder what is offered,
Looking from the top,
Winging not to stop,
Swiftly in flight,
Pursuing the ever glowing light,
No end in sight,
By the coming of tonight,




Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

© Copyright 2000 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Saunni
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1 posted 2000-07-12 12:58 PM


Hey, cool poem! I enjoyed it...you write really well...

Sauni

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