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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2000-07-11 09:36 PM





I am only satisfied, when I'm with you.
All thoughts and cares drift away.
And if tomorrow, was to cease to be,
I'd be content in your arms today.

With just a mere touch you can take me,
to places I've never been before.
Soaring with you like the wind,to unknown
galaxies, and far distance shores.

You give me a reason for living.
like a caged bird, that's been set free.
To you, I give my heart and my soul.
Please accept them, and complete me!


If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

© Copyright 2000 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-07-11 09:48 PM


This is lovely, such tender thoughts.
insect
Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

2 posted 2000-07-12 01:11 AM


Very nice poem!
Here's another one for you

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The kitty plays with the ball of yarn
While her brothers and sisters stay in the barn
Rolling, tumbling with lots of fun
Danger approaches, quickly she runs

She runs and runs and wants to rest
Ends up running into a bee's nest
Then here comes the big bad dog
But the bees chase him under a log

The big bad dog chase has come to an end
Because the friendly little insects become kitty's friend



[This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-13-2000).]

miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
3 posted 2000-07-12 01:30 AM


short, sweet, and to the point...I like it.  

miriam coronado



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