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There was a girl... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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There was a girl there was a boy to each other they gave laughter, love and joy The closer they got the more they shared as time went on the more they cared One night he said "I can't love you anymore" "I don't want to love you anymore" and so he closed the door Time went on anger, sadness and dispair a strangled friendship dismantled parts - everywhere That depth of understanding now locked behind closed thoughts two loving hearts released as they were caught However much the sadness the pain at being left I do believe the memories are better for being kept... [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RainbowGirl~ AMEN, sweetheart ! What a little treasure from your heart this one is. Thanks for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Cindy! Well done! Denise |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Yes! hang on to the memories! This is a sweet read.  MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Rainbow Girl.... What a wonderful expression: "I do believe the memories are better for being kept....." Yes!!!!!!! Life is but a dream... so sleep easy... |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Wonderfully expressive!!! Great feelings expressed here.....and I couldn't agree more...they are better kept!!  Julie :) |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
love the ending on this...the middle is that sad stuff that none of us like to go through, but when you get to where you are at the end, it means you are getting better |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Marge: I'm not sure about treasure but certainly a little rainbow..*g* HUSG Denise: Thank you.. HUSG Magnolia: I will, thanks.. HUGS Sunny1: It's a double edged sword.. HUGS JulieAnn: They most surely are.. HUGS Corazon: You always did understand my humour..*g* HUSG |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
love lost is never truly so o yuh good job cindyloo |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
A life time of memories to treasure, sad but very true, beautiful piece. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ohhh.... phooey... i hate it when that happens!! what a true to life poem, cindy.... lovely! |
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