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This Kiss
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This Kiss |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada 
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we stood in the doorway his hands on my waist the clock tickling loudly almost in haste he moved in closer his eyes locked in mine I long for his kiss For just a moment in time his lips meet mine and I feel the sensation no longer must I wait to give into the sweet temptation my knees go weak my palms become sweaty I go back to that place I have been so many times already the world disappears all that's left is him and I and as we pull away I feel as though I could fly "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Gotta love it. A kiss can be the sweetest thing on earth at times. Great job. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes...........yes.........yes.......... Sweet, delicious, and passionate..... both your words and the kiss! Life is but a dream... |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Mark as always thanks for those kind words Sunny1 Thank you so very much!! I love your work and look for it all the time!! Your praises are taken straight to my heart "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful description of the romantic ecstasy of an embrace and a kiss...James |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
james thanks so much |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Martini, There is nothing like a sweet kiss, especially when the knees go weak, and one knows that they care. This was very delightful, I could almost feel that kiss. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Thanks bill.... a great kiss is betterthan anything else in the world, that feeling of forgetting everything else around you, where you're no longer thinking just feeling, it's wonderful!!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Martini, this was wonderful and discriptive, it took me there. Parker |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
this is so sweet...reminded me of my first kiss never say never |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Parker... thanks!!! I'm glad you enjoyed.... Paula, thank you, I'm glad it brought back happy memories for you. Although this wasn't my first kiss, but every kiss with him was as special as the first...  |
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