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Day's Journey |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I see you and oh good morning as the sun begins to paint the sky and oh without a siren's warning intense to kiss the night goodbye... a whisper of this reverie to brush your cheek with back of hand remnant of a dream so sweet I may not ever understand... reality turns my eyes gray reality I'm far away secret in my smile... scratching lines in prison walls each day another mile... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW amazing images here, from hope to dismay, you moved well.... though I would have liked it the other way around.... serenity, this is wonderful... regards, sudhir |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Just beautiful....and the sad thing is those prison walls are normally of our own making. Thank you..........  |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very beautiful and it's very expressive. Great job!!! Nathan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
*sigh* ...my my my ... me sitting here with no muse and you post this...  im envious of the poem, but not the "inspiration" got some of the same here ... you know...i know ...  but poetry always makes those walls "prettier" me thinks  keep dreaming those sweet dreams me twin...untill *kiss kiss* me I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ These thoughts are beautiful, sad and powerfully moving. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sudhir---it WILL be the other way around... I thank you as always for your kind gentle reply... Balladeer-I know...sigh...I know...thanks for the nice comp. Nate------I appreciate it much...my grats.. JM--------as always, what can I say...except. ..be careful...you may already know too much! LOL m'twin... Marge-----gonna write something happy, real soon, won't promise tho, I have discovered that brings on writer's block! Love to ya mom. |
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