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Martini
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0 posted 2000-07-11 10:21 AM



LOVE
joy
happiness
sorrow
sex
hurt
pain
guilt
longing
caressing
hug
kiss
touch
feel
smile
laugh
cry
yearn forgive
forget
move on
lust
like
forever
never
marriage
children
divorce
death
LOVE


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2000-07-11 10:26 AM


One word.......one million feelings.
Great work~

Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-07-11 11:05 AM


ahhh- the many faces of love.  Amazing how just one word has so much power over us all.  Nice one here.
Martini
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3 posted 2000-07-11 12:42 PM


Thank you both for you kind replys

Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2000-07-11 12:43 PM


many faces,
many visions,
many sensations,
many emotions,

well done Martini...

and WELCOME TO PASSIONS..

and enjoy your stay here  

regards,
sudhir

Martini
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5 posted 2000-07-13 03:26 PM


sudhir
thanks so much for the welcome!!! And the kind words
I am enjoying my stay thus far!!  

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-07-13 03:30 PM


right at the top of the page, what do I see waiting for me?  A triple Martini!  Loved the cycle of emotion here...and welcome to the forum!
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7 posted 2000-07-13 05:51 PM


Yes, one little four letter word does say ever so much, nicely done
Martini
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8 posted 2000-07-18 04:15 PM


serenity... a triple martini huh!!  
I'm glad you enjoyed!!!  

Jeff: does it ever!!
thanks for reading

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

ethome
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9 posted 2000-07-18 04:53 PM


Well, I have to say you have all the emotions involved covered quite well. Great way to bring them out. I enjoyed very much.
Martini
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10 posted 2000-07-21 12:19 PM


thanks....
I just wrote every emotion i was feeling one day down....
i'm glad you read it

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2000-07-21 12:25 PM


Martini,

Excellent range of emotions you display here.  Your words paint a beautiful picture.  Nice writing!!

Welcome to Passions!!  Looking forward to more!!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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12 posted 2000-07-25 01:08 AM


Martini, I like this very much. the last line really did it for me, after death is love...... oh, and this group..

caressing
hug
kiss
touch
feel
smile
Parker


I sorta thought Parker fit in there nicely.

  

wayoutwalt
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13 posted 2000-07-25 01:09 AM


ooo parker took my smiling yuh liked this i did
Martini
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14 posted 2000-07-25 10:23 AM


Parker...
that was my favorite grouping too!!!  Nice addition! hahahhaha

thanks for reading


Wayoutwalt.... i'm glad you enjoyed


"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

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