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jennie may*
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 122


0 posted 2000-07-11 02:16 AM


          you didn't know it...

but tonight I watched you
while you slept
all
balled up in my arms

your chest moved
up and down
up and down
in a rhythm that
could have made me cry

your brown eyes
hidden under
dewy lids
stirring up a
world of dreams
for us to make come true

breath leaving your body
that shares its life
with mine

I love you

I don't want to sleep tonight

I just want to shelter you
like a girl who
loves too much to
explain in words

until you meet me again
at sunrise

Goodnight sweetie...



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MagnoliaBlue
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since 2000-05-12
Posts 367

1 posted 2000-07-11 02:19 AM


Oh, What a sweetie, for sure!

Sweet poem too!  

MagnoliaBlue


~My Skipper Jim
I love you!
Your Lady June~

AniKay83
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since 2000-06-28
Posts 388
Missing Since 1999
2 posted 2000-07-11 02:19 AM


Thats sweet. the idea of watching your love sleep, nothing but innocence. killer.

"I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel."
~Touch and Go



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