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bartlo16
New Member

since 2000-07-10

Posts 2

0 posted 2000-07-10 08:24 PM

A smile from you touches me,
Your gentle lips, they do too.
How did you ever entice my timid heart,
Too fall in love with you?

Could it be your long dark brown hair,
Flowing down your back with ease?
Soft, fragrant, and sexy,
Blowing in the breeze?

Was it your piercing deep eyes,
That stared at me so blue?
Seeing with their kindness,
Exposing the beauty of you.

Perhaps it was your caring smile,
It's friendly, joyful, and true.
Touching me with your laughter,
Listening to you.

Maybe it was when you spoke,
Your voice so soft, loving, and serene.
Words that came out so tender,
My eyes were shining and they beamed.

Possibly it was your exciting red lips,
When they were soft and moist on mine.
Or perhaps your soft full breasts,
Touching my chest sometimes.

And then it might have been when we touched,
Feeling passions that had awakened from the depths.
Your body near me so soft and precious,
Holding you while we slept.

I looked at you and stared,
Oh, what a beautiful sight.
Seeing you in your nakedness,
Has made my world so bright.

You know that I am in love with you,
That will never change with time.
Yes, you have enticed my timid heart,
I pray one day soon you'll be mine.

Bill Charles

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-07-10 08:42 PM

Bartlo~
Welcome to the wonderful family of Passionate Poets.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-07-10 09:21 PM

wow!

Kathleen

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-07-10 11:59 PM

very beautiful, and loving.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2000-07-11 09:58 PM

Thank you both for the kind replies. Hearing words like this is inspiring to continue writing.

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