»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #8
»
dedicated to JanetMarie or anyone w/o a Muse
| Open Poetry #8 |
|
dedicated to JanetMarie or anyone w/o a Muse |
|
|
Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again 
|
*Absolutely...(the story of a girl)* This is the story of a girl. She wrote a poem and changed the whole world. And while she reads and replies and chews on her pen I absolutely love her when she writes. How many posts in a thread? She writes with hope but her Muse called in "Dead". How many poems must be read before the pen hits the pad and writes a new verse? As long as she sits there waiting... Don't hurry to worry; you'll find a new Muse. And when the verse you write is anew, share with us the rhymes that you choose. Well, your words always bleed with honesty. Your Muse ran away? How could it be? But I believe in your talent 'cause you put faith in me... This is the story of a girl. She wrote a poem and changed the whole world. And while she reads and replies and chews on her pen I absolutely love her when she writes. How many poets would stay? Just to post their replies day after day? And will your Muse come back today? So you can write and make bright this one poet's face? As long as you're out there reading, and making replies after reading our lines. I know the wheels, they turn in your mind. Inspiration in the poems you find. Well, your words always bleed with honesty. Your Muse ran away? How could it be? But I believe in your talent 'cause you put faith in me... This is the story of a girl. She wrote a poem and changed the whole world. And while she reads and replies and chews on her pen I absolutely love her when she writes. *guess what i was listening to? =) this is dedicated to a good friend, a great mentor, and a kick-ass poet (that really needs her Muse back!!) named Janet Marie. hope you dig it.* < !signature--> We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. [This message has been edited by Ethan_Halo (edited 07-10-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Ethan Halo - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ethan I certainly dig the wonderful poem, if any one finds Janet's muse please hand her back to Janet. She answers to the name Janet's muse and is missed dearily. Last seen running out Janet's front door screaming and laughing madily. There is of course a reward if you find the muse, the reward is to read more beautiful poetry from our Jan. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So many times you've touched me with your words ... At"3am", with your "Rose", and that amazing "Angry Bird"  I've seen your heart in between your lines, I know the pain your dress up in rhymes. I know your soul is kind and true... and I hope you also have the faith ... that I do...in you. ----------------- I've said it before and I'll say it again.... Ethan you ROCK!!! Man oh man do you know how to make a girl smile.. and if this dont make my muse get her poetic butt in gear ... nothing will thank you sweets..ya made my day with this... you know me well ... I do indeed chew my pen LOL and thank you for the many encouraging replies to my work as well ... I know we see a lot of ourselves in each others poetry, one of the amazing gifts of this place ... wise well beyond your years my friend..YOU ARE thanks Ethan...very much. love ya jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is sooooooooooooooo cool!!! I'm singing with you Ethan.....quietly because the neighborhood dogs would start to howl We shall find that Muse  but when we do.........STAND BACK and watch the fire works!! [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 07-10-2000).] |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well my friend...I could use this again.. my muse has left me high and dry.. what else is new with that moody girl I was reading in my library and came across this... hope your doing well my buddie peace and poetry Ethan-babes Happy New Year When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
