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Poe Ay
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since 2000-06-30
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0 posted 2000-07-10 09:31 AM


PART (I)

I needed someone to talk to,
so I turned to my best friend.
She said "Come see me latter,
to my own life I must attend."

So I waited several hours,
before I came to see her again.
She said "You must leave now,
I'm looking for new friends.

Finally the time arrived,
she said "I had naught to fear."
She offered me her body,
but she would not lend an ear.

She said that "I must realise,
that for short times we must part."
But even minutes seem forever,
when she turns and tears my heart.


PART (II)

But alas my love I know it's true,
what you have said to me.
That I must woe you to my side,
whilst allowing you to be free.

So I"ll give my heart and soul to you
and I'll love you to the end.
You give me life, love and hope.
Your truely my best friend.



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Nan
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1 posted 2000-07-10 09:50 AM


These are wonderful sentiments to bring along on your first visit to Passions - Welcome aboard, and check your email for a special greeting...
LngJhnAg
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2 posted 2000-07-10 10:04 AM


I echo Nan's sentiments - welcome to the Forums - please post more - you have an interesting style that begs for more.
Musicmaker1969
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3 posted 2000-07-10 11:41 AM


What a beautiful poem.  How true the sentiments are that you write.  Sometimes when we need an ear, the response we want is not always what we get.  But in the long run, we always have a friend in that person, someone we can love forever.  Very thoughtful and appreciative toward your friend(s).

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