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To Blossom From Love
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To Blossom From Love |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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To Blossom From Love So delicate the rose placed there by loving hands. Something so innocent as a touch can destroy the beauty it possess leaving it in waste. Man as in nature can also be destroyed with as little more than a touch, word or deed. As with a rosebud mans heart is were his beauty and life force emanate from. To tamper with or force conflicting ideas would destroy the very nature of his soul. The heart of nature and man must come forth out in to the open to breath in life and all that it so freely gives so as to grow to maturity. A rose has no choice as to the direction it is going, but man if nurtured as a babe and trained well as a youth, has a good chance of walking in to maturity confident and his heart will of showed him the way. On this walk through life he will have in front of him many choices and also directions to choose from. Each step taken with foresight and wisdom will guild him through with mastery over much. In the height of his life he will have blossomed, giving all who look on him in a loving way, pride and heart felt joy. As with a bud that bloomed in to a majestic rose, so to the boy will grow to manhood with all of the beauty and love for life that in the beginning was so freely given. By, Cerenity |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ You have lit up the screen with this lovely presentation. Beauty and wisdom - a joy to behold. 'A rose has no choice as to the direction it is going, but man if nurtured as a babe and trained well as a youth, has a good chance of walking in to maturity confident and his heart will of showed him the way.' Love ya', gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh this is just ever so beautiful, lovingly written and read  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge-Tracie Thank you so much for your lovely replys, I was not quiet sure about this poem, its one you can't get off your mind, yet you can't seem to put it all together, and I really did not know if it made any sense to anyone but me, thank you again. Love, Cerenity |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
C, this is lovely and very well written yes, it "makes sense" .. its wonderful with the rose metaphor. very nice take care jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
This "rose" says well done. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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