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Kiss Goodbye

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spiked
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0 posted 07-09-2000 10:11 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for spiked

Kiss Goodbye

Give me a kiss before you go
Just one kiss to let me know
That what Iíve felt is not untrue
That love is there for us to pursue.

Iíve felt my heartbeat once again
Youíve touched my life
Brought me back within
The world Iíve craved that soon will end.

The hollowed feel of life without
Your gentle touch, your wit, your pout.
The way you call me just to see
What I think of simple things


To wake you in the early morn
To tell you that itís time to go
But knowing when the evening comes
Youíll be there once again

These memories Iíll hold for you
These memories we shared
May seem so tiny for others to
But love like this is rare

Weíve talked until the daylight come
Caressed the night, all that remains
Is the thought that life must still go on
And I will still want you

So give me a kiss before you go
The kind of kiss to let me know
That everything we share, we feel
Is more than just a dream.

© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 07-09-2000 10:22 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This is such a sweet way to bid farewell to a loved one.

Elizabeth


I'm grabbing my hat and coat
I'm leaving the cat a note
Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town!


Lady Web
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2 posted 07-09-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Lady Web   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady Web

I vision this as a scene from a harlequin romance novel.

Again very nice work
ethome
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3 posted 07-09-2000 10:42 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

You got my kiss! I might even stay long enough to give you a couple or three thousand. Is'nt it funny how you can't seem to wear them out (kisses) they're just as good the last time as the first.

Great poem I really liked it!
spiked
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4 posted 07-10-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thank you all so very much.
Rich
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5 posted 07-10-2000 09:04 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Great piece Rich, one kiss can tell more than
a thousand words ever could....the ones that
shake your knees and melt your heart....
serenity blaze
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6 posted 07-10-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Tough poem to write Richard.  I do feel your pain.  
Beth
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7 posted 07-10-2000 09:37 AM       View Profile for Beth   Email Beth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beth


~Good-byes are always hard...You made that very clear with the emotion you displayed in this poem..Did you get the kiss?~

Blessed Be,
Beth
spiked
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8 posted 07-12-2000 03:41 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

Thanks Serenity
Yes I did Beth but not really what I wanted.
Not ready for goodbye
Adrienne
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9 posted 07-12-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Adrienne   Email Adrienne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Adrienne

Your poem did touch me, for I must also say goodbye to the one I love....  
spiked
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Not an easy thing to do Adrienne but life must move forward whether we like it or not.
Thanks
Rich
Martini
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11 posted 07-13-2000 10:30 AM       View Profile for Martini   Email Martini   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Martini

Great poem

The last kiss goodbye is probably harder than the goodbye itself....  You want it to go one forever but know that it can't at all. And it's so hard to pull away.

I'm sorry to hear you had to say goodbye to a love, I hope that love finds you again soon....  And those first kisses are something to look forward to.

excellent writing


"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost
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12 posted 07-14-2000 01:35 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

SOOOO sad... Soooo sorry. I do feel for you. Do you still see her? How are things besides this?
At least you got your kiss goodbye.. Wish it was a hello kiss for your sake though..

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.
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Nice writting!!!!!!!
Mark Bohannan
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14 posted 07-14-2000 12:20 PM       View Profile for Mark Bohannan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark Bohannan

Sweet and sorrowful.  That last kiss can really be a killer.  Great writing.
JamesMichael
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15 posted 07-14-2000 03:18 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautiful poetry and a sad scenario...and after the desire for that last kiss must come the realization and acceptance that perhaps the last kiss has already been given...
James
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Beautifull poem! I too have had to have a kiss good bye... but I dont think of it as a kiss goodbye forever .. it keeps me gong becuase I think of it as a bye for now ill see ya around type of kiss... See I am really bad with goodbyes and that is a way for me to handle it and it works! Well good luck, hope to read some more of your poems!! I have some poems about love on here too! Check them out!! = )
~*~Preslil1~*~
spiked
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17 posted 07-14-2000 11:28 PM       View Profile for spiked   Email spiked   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for spiked

I am very grateful for the response of this poem from each and everyone of you for this is the one that expresses what I am going through right now and your support is greatly appreciated.
By the way good bye is in 2 weeks.
Life is short enjoy what time you have with the one's you most love!
Love can come and go sometimes and we are at it's mercy.
Janet Marie
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18 posted 07-14-2000 11:49 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I was trying to to reply to this the other night when the site crashed ...
I'll try again  
beautiful poem to say goodbye with...
well expressed emotions.
this is always the hardest lesson of our hearts
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~
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sadly beautiful
 
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