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Tenacity of a Serene Heart
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Tenacity of a Serene Heart |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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timeless aChe of chrysalis emerging sHaken to my bone now is youR eternal mother aflight thIs worm for home constant iS changes season in dreams Tonight i expire tormented On a silken sigh you my serPent whisper lie o wisdom sHower sweet alla free my trEmbles of elixir a phoenix Rises into night |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Neat sub message! Excellent poem! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooohhhh me twin is playing with poetry again... and shes looking so fine in her new design... very cool me sweet ... cryptic, mystic,"bewitching..  (hehe)me likes... me loves ya too me I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay, okay, I tried to "wrap" it up all pretty---but no go....but it IS a triple acrostic...(serenity exits grumbling...) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb serenity. . . It takes much skill to write a poem like this. . .your talent shows wonderfully here. . . Excellent my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
So this is the one you were talkin about? I can see wrackin your brains your over this. Excellent job! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a lovely tribute to Christopher and so subtly implied too  LOL on the originality here |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
"subtlty is the language of genius." okay so no one famous REALLY said that, but maybe i'll be famous one day. i mean, someone famous should have said that, cause it is true. your style is truly unique in a wonderful way and this poem definitely has your signature on it. and it's got a little something extra for the kids at home. very well done. and by the by, it shines with subtlty. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Subtle, yet pronounced, silent, yet announced, how is that so? how can that be? Well it is serenity upto her poetry again.... and is it not fun? yes it is... (well these are my two muses talking to each other )Well, I enjoyed this surely... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ It had to have taken a lot of thoughtful work to come up with this TRIPLE acrostic ! WOW ! You did a great job on it. What a special treat ! Love ya' gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Hello oh bubbly one! Have fun did we? Want some of the asprin I had left over from that acrostic sestina, written in blank verse? (hint-hint!) *wink* Thank you m'freind, though I am hardly deserving of a tribute such as this (specially when I was the instigator of the headache!) Hugs to you, and thanks! Chris |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Cool I just wrote a couple of acrosstics my self, they aren't as good as this one, but I'll post them anyway so you can all read them . Enjoyed it . L.of.L. Tom . Christopher - Your a lucky person, a tribute just to you . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to everybody--especially Marge, for all of your help...I'll e ya later with the story of "what went wrong"...lol and Christopher, thanks for your encouragement and always "pushing" me to try a little harder...Hugs to you. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This is sure brilliance. I bow to you and your wonderful talent. It must have taken alot to come up with this and it is well worth what ever effort you afforded it. |
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