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Open Poetry #8

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Poetias
Junior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 26

0 posted 2000-07-09 05:29 PM

All the time I was worried about your
heart
when mine is just as weak;
weak
when I leave this place to find my dreams reality
Do you think I'll be okay with
me?
I'm hurting
But trim the wick and light the candle
burn in memory of me.

(One of my earlier writings, please be gentle with your critique)

"Even as love crowns you, so shall he crucify you." -Khalil Gibran
THE PROPHET

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

1 posted 2000-07-09 05:35 PM

I think it is great.
Love the attitude it shows.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Poetias
Junior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 26

2 posted 2000-07-09 05:38 PM

Prometheus - The way in which you embrace my work, it is definitely flattering.
(You're making me blush)

Thank you :0

"Even as love crowns you, so shall he crucify you." -Khalil Gibran
THE PROPHET

Poetias
Junior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 26

3 posted 2000-07-09 05:39 PM

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