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Wishing Hearts |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
A star we wish in the moonlit night For one day our souls to reunite In each others arms we long to be Gazing in each others eyes we see No need for spoken words Our hearts communicate a language unheard Fate continue to keep us apart Thus not allowing to indulge ours hearts To feel his hand caress my skin A touch my heart would recommend To caress him the same in return Lingering desires we both do yearn Would set our bodies and souls afire Awaiting this union and what will transpire For now we anxiously wait For the day our hearts with love we'll consummate |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice lines Lady Web - the waiting is the hard part is'nt it? You really portray a longing in this poem. Very nicely done. |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Thanks Enthome Good things do come to those who wait (For awhile anyways) I'm glad you liked it. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LadyWeb~ What a lovely line you have tucked away in this one - 'To feel his hand caress my skin A touch my heart would recommend' YES ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
Prometheus: Thanks so very much for your reply. I enjoy everyones work here. Marge: Always enjoy hearing your replies on my work it is such an honor in its self. Thanx [This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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