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Love Won't Be Denied
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Love Won't Be Denied |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Love looked my way today from the shadows of a heartache tentatively touching a heart grown cold. Love called to me in whisper soft words from the lips of a broken hearted man stealing my heart and warming my soul. Love took me by the hand leading me straight into his arms to touch to heal the hurt that lies there. Love challenged me today to let the past lie buried and walk into a new heart a new dream Love won. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Wonderful words you have shared! Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Awwwwwwww ! I love 'happy-ever-afters' !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poetias Junior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 26 |
This is definitely a favorite. I think my work is on the other end of the spectrum compared to yours, it truly compliments my emotional state right now. Thank you for writing this. It's lovely. "Even as love crowns you, so shall he crucify you." -Khalil Gibran THE PROPHET |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jamie...I like sharing with you, you always say such good things. Marge...I am a lucky woman I know to have found such a wonderful man. Poetias...I know what you are going thru but I am living proof that love wont be denied. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Paula, As they saying goes, "love conquers all". Happy to see you have found love again. Bet you deserve it. Lone Wolf Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'm glad love won. These things have a peculiar way of working out. Great poem, very enjoyable read! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Paula, This is excellent. Thoroughly enjoyed it. And what a great line this was. "Love looked my way today from the shadows of a heartache" Thanks for sharing. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lone Wolf...It will happen for you too... ethome...peculiar is not the word...amazing is more like it Eloise...thanks for reading |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Paula....... I can't even tell you how much I needed to read this..... I loved the ending, I just loved the whole thing! Life is but a dream... so sleep easy... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
All it takes is time and sooner or later.......... excellent write |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Paula I'm so glad, everyone deserves love and you have displayed yours here. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny1...as ever your words are like a gift when I open my poems...thank you for always saying something nice, Tracie...yes I have found love and its grand Mark...Time is soemthing I have plenty of darlin you know that. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh, I loved your thoughts in this Paula! Love should always win! Wonderful sentiments ... liked this a lot I did! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
thanks Kit i enjoyed writing this one |
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