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I Wonder (co-written by dark angel)
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I Wonder (co-written by dark angel) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven 
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I Wonder with thoughts of my heart once so young love-wondered it dwelled upon enamoured flight of words motionless and I, unstirred this heart never broken while young enough to learn and heal the way youthful hearts do in wonderment of 24 years before discovering how it felt to love and be loved 20 years of flowering I ponder of first love delayed will it be my last? is it possible that a heart minus youths lessons ever really learns to heal? I wonder by jamie and maree |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Again you two...wonderful |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
perfect pondering from both of your poets pens ... wonder not...love heals those hearts.  take care jm |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully written, great team writing. "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel and Prometheus~ Wonderfully rendered. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lady Web Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 96Houston, Texas |
To ponder makes the mind wander Love is what makes us human Very nice  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You guys - I am in like with this poem!!! LOL - awesome stuff, poetic duo... K |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Prometheus and Dark Angel, Wonderful writing by you both!!! Very much enjoyed this one. Don't we all ask ourselves the same questions? LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Siren's Song Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 17 |
Jamie.. okay, so it's not quite Kilroy.. but you get the point.. again, lovely work.. quite a team the two of you make!! |
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Tanga Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 39BC Canada |
Heart footprints of life's memories always remain. It is the youthful lessons that begets new beginnings. Hugs <**> |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Dear Jamie, it is always my pleasure to be working with a most talented poet as you my friend. Looking forward to doing it again And I thank you for all your imput dear, I do appreciate them so.Thank you for giving me the opportunity to work with you more than once I am grateful hon Thank you all so very much for you lovely replies. Both Jamie and I appreciate them so. Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thanks for all the kind words everyone. Maree- Tis I who am thankful to have your pen lend its flavor to this piece. Your arranngement of the words makes all the difference in the world, Thanks. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a team you two make. This is lovely and it is the perfect expression of my life over the past 26 (plus) years. It is like you opened my life,s book and ask the question that has been plaguing me for so long. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Good job you two!  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP "Everything is your own damn fault, if you are any good." E. Hemmingway |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Mark- We are all different- yet so much the same.. glad you could relate. JP- Thank You! Maree is easy to write with. She has so much to offer, yet has no big ego to get in the way....lol Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hey Jamie sweetie, why would I want my ego to get in the way of us? hey? hehehe You are such a sweetie I do enjoy writing with you. *hugs*thanks Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Splutter...splutter...cough cough...no big ego? Errrrrrrrrrrrrr...yeah, ok.... I won't mention all the times I saw with my own eyes the emergence of dear M's ego... HAHA...actually, you know what Jamie - you are absolutely correct - that is a very true statement...too humble sometimes actually... K |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well done poet duo!! Enjoyed this a bunch..er or a couple |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Kamla-You know her well......lol Martie-- Thanks, BUNCHES< !signature--> Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". [This message has been edited by Prometheus (edited 07-11-2000).] |
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