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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-07-09 05:34 AM


Two Tear Drops

As I sit here I wonder
Do you really understand
The pain you have caused
The pain that has entered
Entered into my soul.

I watch as the tears fall
Down your checks
For now I inflict the pain
The pain of my words
Words of Goodbye.

I have no apologies
I have no regrets
I will keep our memories
I wish you well in life.
Life has so many questions.

Please go, walk out the door
Do not turn around
Do not look to see
If I shed a tear or two
Two Loney tear drops fall.


7-08-00

© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
1 posted 2000-07-09 05:47 AM


If I shed a tear or two
Two Loney tear drops fall.

a beautifully written poem Kitkat, I hope writing the words of the poem have healed some of the pain, anyway take care and thanks for sharing.

"Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2000-07-09 06:13 AM


so sad yet beautiful kitkat   thanks for sharing  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-07-09 10:36 AM



This is so well written, I love it......

          There's a song in there....
    
                    "2 Lonely teardrops"

  


Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~

Janet Marie
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Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-07-09 11:07 AM


hi kathy ...

sad but beautiful poem
but there is strength in these words as well,
when we can choose to walk away from the pain
it is always a show of healing on the way.
take care
jm

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5 posted 2000-07-09 11:30 AM


KitKat~
A tear of regret so sadly fallen -

'I will keep our memories'

I send a *hug*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2000-07-09 11:32 AM


Beautiful and heart-felt
I too hope that putting this on paper helped to with some healing

Lady Web
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since 2000-04-12
Posts 96
Houston, Texas
7 posted 2000-07-09 03:01 PM


Very nice, Everyone does go through This one time or another. I know I have.
kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
8 posted 2000-07-11 08:36 PM


Thank-you all for your replies. It does help to write about the pain. I too, believe then the healing will begin when you can express it. It is hard but I am strong.

--------------
You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
9 posted 2000-07-11 09:59 PM


Kitkat...sharing troubles...especially in this form...lets the pain just ease on out...keep writing keep sharing we are all here for you
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
10 posted 2000-07-11 10:07 PM


kitkat,

I can feel your pain and sadness in your words.  Looks like you have had a bad breakup.  My heart goes out to you.  This was great writing and really shows what is in your heart.  There will be sun where there are now clouds.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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